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Not bad

I got the idea behind the plot, and the animation was superb. The entire 'rawr showdown' idea's never been my thing, but all in all this one was surprisingly watchable- usually I just don't watch fighting flashes at all. However, you consistantly made simply grammar mistakes, which made me both laugh and grind my teeth. Please check the text for grammar and spelling before you include it in a flash. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

SHOWER!

Be showered by my nerd love! Wahahaha!
God, I HATE that series. The left breast thing bugged the crap outta me, too.
But the thing I hated the most about that series was the grammar. And spelling.

Funny

Dunno why people hate this so much. You're 100% right, it's alot better than a ton of the stuff on the portal.
Just wish you would've fixed the grammar, it's terrible.

I'm a magical sea-man...

BEST. PICK-UP LINE. EVER.

Freakin sweet

There is NO way you haven't played Maid's Story.
I adore this game.

I tip my fedora to you

You, good sir, are remarkable.
The simple layering of sound as the song continues is quite cool.
Keep up the work!